All day I was stooping and bending
Then went to the spa for some mending
The masseuse was no lady
Her methods quite shady
So my story has a very happy ending.
Then went to the spa for some mending
The masseuse was no lady
Her methods quite shady
So my story has a very happy ending.
See, I can be blue too!
ReplyDeleteI like the "story" and the wordplay in your title. Meter needs some work, though. You get **.
ReplyDeleteThe last two lines flow better if written
Her methods were shady
My tale has a quite happy ending.
Yes, I prefer your alternate "ending"
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