Saturday, August 13, 2011

OP11. First try Definitely NOT X-rated

I hope this meets the standards for a proper limerick.

There once was a butcher named Sutton
whose job was preparing the mutton
while carving the lamb
he slipped on a ham
and found himself flat on his button.

1 comment:

  1. 2½ stars. Not bad, esp. for a first attempt! It DOES meet the standards -- rhythm is perfect and so are the rhymes. One suggestion: capitalize 1st letter of each line. It's how they're always written.