tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179119864914364117.post6202157134014970969..comments2023-05-20T10:48:26.502-05:00Comments on The Limericist: OP11. First try Definitely NOT X-ratedThe Limericisthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02295894333491128936noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179119864914364117.post-33254712739504832242011-08-13T21:29:53.577-05:002011-08-13T21:29:53.577-05:002½ stars. Not bad, esp. for a first attempt! It ...2½ stars. Not bad, esp. for a first attempt! It DOES meet the standards -- rhythm is perfect and so are the rhymes. One suggestion: capitalize 1st letter of each line. It's how they're always written.The Limericistnoreply@blogger.com