Thursday, December 8, 2016

OP376. I can't win

Another contest entry.  Something tells me Suzanne will like this one.

I hate shopping. Adrift, what to buy
There's no stopping for thrift, price too high
Just to give her a lift
I deliver my gift
Now she's hopping mad, miffed, so I cry.

1 comment:

  1. Yes, you're right about that 'something.' I just love how you throw all those multiple rhymes in there, all in the right places, and the whole thing in the end is still a good story with a plot. Nice job!!