Friday, September 2, 2016

OP344. A Doggerel of D's

A drunk druggie drummer named Dwayne
Rather disliked his dimwit Great Dane
What the dog (like a druid)
Would damn well dare do - did
His dense dick drilled down a deep drain.

2 comments:

  1. After reading, I realized what a clever title you gave this one, Suz!

    Fine work, too, on rhyming 'druid' and 'do - did.' The story is a bit convoluted, but that's to be expected with the tight restriction on the stresses.

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  2. Thank you, Professor; and thanks also for your dogged determination, patience and assistance in helping me clear up the imperfections so that the outcome is what it should be. Kudos!

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