Tuesday, January 29, 2013

OP74. Heavy petting

I know a young girl from Vancouver
So fat a bulldozer can't move her
And although she may
Not be much of a lay
I tell you, she sucks like a Hoover.

2 comments:

  1. Other than mixing past tense (1st line) and present tense (every other line), this one is GREAT, Dave!

    May I suggest 1st line of
    "There is a young girl from Vancouver"?

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